The Introduction

The introduction.

 

1. Attention grabber

I attracted the audience by asking questions about safety of schools and statistic of current state of school violence.

 

2. Explains the topic

I explained the limitation of many former solutions and suggested psychological approach.

 

3. My thesis

I decided my thesis "we should focus on bully's psychology first" to resolve school violence. However, I think this thesis is not really clear and direct so I should change another thesis.

 

 

Everyday students go to school and spend half of the day in school. People usually consider it as a place of society or the other home. However, are those schools really safe? School violence has been an issue in Korean society, and now it is also serious. - according to 2014 school bullying research on the actual condition, about 1.3 million cases occurred. There have been a lot of various ways and plans to resolve this problem, but there are no appreciable effects and bullies do not show any changes about their faults. However, If we approach bully's minds psychologically and study their causes - focused on "why", we would resolve this problems successfully therefore we should focus on bully's psychology first.