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Everyday students go to school and spend half of the day in school. People usually consider it as a place of society or the other home. However, are those schools really safe? School violence has been an issue in Korean society, and now it is also serious. - according to 2014 school bullying research on the actual condition, about 1.3 million cases occurred. There have been a lot of various ways and plans to resolve this problem, but there are no appreciable effects and bullies do not show any changes about their faults. However, If we approach bully's minds psychologically and study their causes - focused on "why", we would resolve this problems successfully therefore we should focus on bully's psychology first.
Bullies have their own psychological reasons and causes. These are representative adolescents psychological features. They are mentally immature and confused about their identities and influence a lot from their friends. Also, they are showing off a sense of superiority among their friends and change their behaviors or opinions for conforming behavior. (They depend on their friends a lot and strive not to be alienated from their friends.) They lack a sense of empathy.(usually it is developed as they grow) They show many psychological disabilities such as depression.
There are lots of regulations about punishments like zero tolerance policy, intensification but they are not considered as successful ways to resolve. In 2013, school violence alternative debate in Assembly was about limitations of punishments. Actually in 2012, one student who was attacked experienced trauma during giving heavy penalties to bully. After reconciliation programs included reflection and apology, he have overcame that shock and trauma. Therefore, we can assure that psychological approach is necessary and important.
Psychological features of adolescents influence and cause school violence. According to my research, I pick specific features like depression, superiority and lack of empathy and these three things can cause violence. Students who have a depression which is caused by social, physical changes and environments feel gloomy and behave aggressively and sensitively. -according to Research of Seoul National University Hospital, 22% of high school students in Korea have severe depression, which is the highest proportion than ordinary persons and university students. It can be carried over into anti-social behaviors, anxiety disorder and behavioral disturbance. In addition, Adolescents usually want to show off their power by bullying others and dominating. One way to show off their power is to make a group that is threatening. -Actually there are 464 groups in Korean schools. Moreover, According to one research, when they studied attacker's brain they found that activity of hippocampus and amygdaloid nucleus that recognize the pain of others is remarkably low. These are just a few psychological features and there will be much more. Therefore, we should focus on these things to grasp real causes of bullies and change their attitudes.
Effects of environments also influence adolescents psychologically and then cause school violence. From the perspective of FAMILY, If parents are aggressive and overcontrol their children, they can assume a defiant attitude. And if parents are be overprotective of their children, they can be self-centered and selfish. When parents have inconsistant child-rearing attitude and are lack of understanding and care, it can affect them poorly. (For example, family who have economic difficulty and lack of support usually neglect their children.) Moreover, the breakdown of a family like divorce can influence adolescents self -formation negatively. For example, proportion of teen-age deviations is increasing hugely. Also, family violence can cause adjustment, behavioral ,nerve and mental disorder.
From the perspective of SOCIETY, how permissive the society is can determine how member of society are exposed to violence. These days, because of development of information and communications, mass media, students can be exposed to unhealthy materials more easily. Also, as commercial viability caused by competition between medias make materials more arousing, it can give students effects more badly and hugely. Harmful environments also can reinforce bad behaviors.
From the perspective of EDUCAITON, students stress out excessive education system that focuses only on college entrance exams. (according to statistics their stress recognition rate are 69%.) Lack of chances of avocation and self-improvement make this situation more serious. Therefore we should focus on bullies from the perspective of their environments which make them attackers and specific causes to do bullying.
Lastly, punishments has no power to resolve school violence. Lots of regulations which are focused on punishments are less effective. (For example, reconciliation programs can make meaningful changes. - 2012 actual case of school violence.) Actually, as a part of punishment teachers remain history of violence in student record and it is a shattering blow to attacker's life. However, these punishments are unilateral actions and not educations for attackers. Therefore, they do not know what their faults are and get more crooked ,resentful. It can cause another violence cases and they will remain as criminals till they grow up. We should change "punishment" as a "recovery".
Some opponents can argue that attackers can think their faults slightly without punishments and they will cause more bullying because they are not afraid of punishments anymore. However, After reconciliation programs, they can realize how their faults hurt victims and apologize from the bottom of their heart. Also, victims of bullying can overcome trauma and pains more easily because they accepted apology and forgave attackers. Moreover, we should know this is an education. Attackers can know what happened, what went wrong. They should have a chance to look back their behaviors and faults. This psychological approach is giving that chance. Also, after that approach, if the attacker is considered that he/she needs punishments, then they would be punished. We cannot be sure that psychological approach are always effective. However, it is obvious that they need warmer attention and care because there is no attacker who make troubles without causes and reasons. Development of system and regulations can make this approach more effectively.
According to statistics, 44% of students who experienced bullying have thoughts of suicide and they are suffering severely. To save those students, we should study attackers psychologically and focus on "why" because psychological features of adolescents influence and cause school violence and effects of environments also influence adolescents psychologically and then make school violence. There were limitations of many regulations and punishments. We should remember that attackers are on equal with victims in terms of exposure of violence. And, schools should be safe for everyone. This is now or never.
