1) What score do you think you deserve? Here is the rubric:

2 points - The first draft is thoughtful and a good start to an effective persuasive essay. It demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument.

1 point - The student completes a first draft that demonstrates an understanding of the classical argument

0 points - The first draft is inadequate

I think I deserved 1 point. It is because I did use my research materials properly but there are no logic and appropriate evidences or examples that can support arguments. Also, I think i should change my thesis statement clearly.

2) What did you do well?

I think everything is  i found appropriate research about my topic.

arguments are based off of opinions and personal feelings
3) What could you have done better?

I should find more appropriate research. Also, I need accurate understanding of format of first and second drafts. I labored to complete my tasks but my first draft is awkward because I just pasted my weekly objects on it.

4) Which part of the classical argument did you use the best?

5) Which part of the classical argument did you use the most poorly?

6) What's your strategy to make your second draft better? My narration is strong. I do a good job explaining the foundations of the issue, and I prepare my audience to hear my argument.